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Rainfall Ringmaster by ~Day5pr1ng:iconDay5pr1ng:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Spiritual > Open


We come from every direction;
gathering to the show.
A calling of the winds;
a longing of the soul.

Ready the lights;
open your eyes.
Seated in a cacophony;
ears burn with hope.

No show is made;
for all to marvel.
No music roars;
to sway the crowd.

The ringmaster smiles;
a look of joy firmly planted.
Rainfall is His show;
water falling under canopy.

The crowd once startled;
now bursting with excitement.
This cleansing rain;
has washed death away.

The ringmaster nods;
the rainfall quiets.
It is time to live;
as never before.
©2006-2009 ~Day5pr1ng
:iconday5pr1ng:

Author's Comments

I was bored at work today and, to be honest, avoiding the things I need to do. Sooo much to do. I find myself moved by lyrics so often. Though I love most forms of music certain genres move me more then most. Even when it has nothing to do with the poem I was moved to write from listening to a few albums of Delerium. Many beautiful songs. :)

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~TheHarpoKnows Jun 30, 2006, 11:26:46 AM
I'm really glad I read this. I think it paints an awesome picture.

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Chris.
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~Day5pr1ng Jun 30, 2006, 8:36:39 PM
:excited: Many thanks THK. I do love a good scene as well. :)

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~SolangeFoxheart Sep 12, 2006, 4:32:45 PM
I can imagine Chris Rice singing this, really. :) I like the scenario you played here. :) And I really like the last verse.... a definate fave! :D

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"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds but the best sang." Henry Van Dyke

Yes, I'm not the best. I know it. But I love it- if I were the best, I'd have freaky fans. *runs screaming from imaginary fans*
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~Day5pr1ng Sep 12, 2006, 6:32:45 PM
:boogie: Thanks you so much for the support and :+fav: action, Foxheart! :glomp:

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~patientlove004 Sep 15, 2006, 7:26:57 PM
awesome. beautiful poem.

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::All of us have creativity in ourselves, we just have to find it:: ~Me
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~Day5pr1ng Sep 18, 2006, 6:03:44 AM
Hey Lydia how's it goin? :) Glad you like the poem.

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*Tex777 Oct 1, 2006, 6:34:39 PM
I like the imagery. :)

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I are in the darkest corner of your mind
being morbid, and writing loud music quietly.
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*Tex777 Oct 2, 2006, 6:28:10 PM
Sure thing. ;)

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I are in the darkest corner of your mind
being morbid, and writing loud music quietly.
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